Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 3 July 2017

Super Squirrel

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WALT: explain
Remember to use the 5 W’s:
  • who is this character?
  • what is happening or about to happen?
  • When did this happen?
  • Where did this take place?
  • Why was the character needed?
Activity - you just took this photo on your phone. Explain what you saw.



Super squirrel is a super hero and he is amazing and he can fly super fast like the Flash and Kid Flash his side kick.

One day a squirrel got super power from a crate he found in the forest. Super Squirrel could fly super fast and he could save people from falling down and dying but Super Squirrel saved the day. Super Squirrel found a cave and he named the cave the Super Squirrel cave.
Dr Electric is a super villain and has super powers. His hands are  electric . Super squirrel crashed down to the ground because Dr Electric hit him. Super Squirrel got up again and he  got hurt and he got up  again and again and he destroyed Dr Electric.

Super Squirrel  threw Dr Electrics body off a cliff. Savater and Super Squirrel had a fight and Super Squirrel smashed Savater to the ground.


Super Squirrel is a amazing because he is super cool and he has friends lots of friends and he can fly super fast. He can run super fast. He has  a cousin and she can fly and run fast and she can use laser vision and Super Squirrel Girl is  amazing  she has super powers.  Super Squirrel Girl can punch a super villain in the face and his nose.The super villain crashes down to the ground and dies.

Super Squirrel is a superhero but Super Squirrel has unlocked a new power, it is a super punch. The super punch is a amazing, the super punch can smash walls. The super punch can smash people and the super punch is  amazing and can destroy  super villains. The super villain got mad at the Super Squirrel but he didn't kill him.  Super Squirrel unlocked  a new superpower  it  was a shield. the shield had super powers. He decided he was going to protect all the good people in the land with it.







Thursday, 17 March 2016

Creative Writing

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     Clip clop clip clop. I can see the delicious, yummy and fresh giraffyyye. oh it’s nice sunny day. I feel hungry…. it's a long time i didn’t eat any giraffe. how can I eat him?

     Lion is very smart he is as smart as a scientist he thought  I wish I can be as tall as him so I can easily hunt him. how can I be taller like him? hmmmmm the lion was thinking in his head. Let’s make a ladder of sticks or let's plan something so I can eat the giraffe for my dinner. If I can have big sticks then I can jump on the giraffe and hunt him, and pull him down on the grass and once he die, I can enjoy the meat. Yeah it worked , giraffe is dead, and I had a great meal. I feel so happy.